I need you to edit the research paper that you’ve done for me.
There’s the corrections that need to be done please:
Summary
CONTENT (-5 points each)
First paragraph — missing strong “attention getting” openings; too direct in stating “call to action”
Body – Missing benefit statements; few persuasive points
Closing – Persuasive “call to ation” missing; “timing” and contact information missing
ORGANIZATION (-5 points each)
Improper organization (direct/indirect) for this audience
STYLE & TONE (-2 points each)
Attention getting opening not strong enough; poor transitions/incoherent style; paragraphs contain multiple ideas/messages; inappropriate emphasis/subordination; negative or discourteous language used; active/passive voice not used appropriately; sentences are not concise; parallel structure isn’t used; vague wording
MECHANICS (-2 points each) & SPELLING (-5 points each)
Spelling is incorrect (-5 points one time if same word is misspelled); grammar or punctuation is incorrect; incorrect use of numbers, dollar amounts, etc.
FORMAT (-2 points each)
Incorrect use of letter format; format is not designed for readability; improper spacing
